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antifreeze

Religion died and made society king
disguise your thoughts, suppress your memories
pour antifreeze onto my mind
it freezes up in the winter time

mind readers
with their astral projections
pesticides won’t keep them at bay
oh, mind readers
we have to pay attention
or they’ll take our sense of decency

I don’t trust my organs they might fail me
I wear an iron lung and a synthetic spleen
pour antifreeze onto my mind
it freezes up in the winter time

mind readers
with their astral projections
pesticides won’t keep them at bay
oh, mind readers
we have to pay attention
or they’ll take our sense of decency

yeah-yeh

8/12/03
©2003-2010 ~fireflycatcher
:iconfireflycatcher:

Author's Comments

i just wrote this


in it's finished form it wil have my friend rian with thimbals on his fingers playing the xylophone while on anphetimimes...groovy

comments?

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:iconpandroid-ishy:
seriously really, really great, +fav
:iconthisismyfate:
beautiful . overall it brought on a sense of confusion. not the poem itself but of what to believe, what's is "real", to take in what the media is hyping. that's what i felt..and the lines--
"pour antifreeze onto my mind
it freezes up in the winter time" ---- at first i thought of a "crutch" .then i thought more and decided that some external components are needed...apologize for the long "devious comment" . great job
:iconmoonsparked:
placebo placebo placebo!
dammit!
haven't i said that before?
it's pretty groovy, got rhythm and all... make a great song.
cheerio
:iconlyonlamb:
"mind readers
with their astral projections
pesticides won’t keep them at bay"

It has a very unique feeling. How religion and the old dogmas seem to stagnate our mind in foolness and idiocy. This is mockery. This is conscience and this is cool. It might be a pretty interesting song.
:iconfoad:
That was crazy good
:iconaudiophile:
i like it. got some flow missing, but overall would be great in song format. i know its hard to make songs, and this one's real good. poink! (kudos.)
:iconjusi:
hehe i like, the lyics are cool and would make a well good song.

nice one

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